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From the New Guy, A Poem of sadness, longing and vengence

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Kuroi Jofune the Pirate

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:16 am


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(this was written about an hour before i was wheeled into surgery, I was alone and scared)


The Pain and Burden I Bear.
By: Kuroi Jofune the Pirate

Its something i hide well
Its my journey through Hell
It weakens and strengthens me
It binds me and hides me from the world

Happiness I'll never know
Pain is all I feel
All I taste is bitterness
My tears are the lesser comfort
Can you tell me how to be happy
When all I do is suffer?

Can you tell me how deep my wounds are?
Do you honestly think your love can fix me?
Do you believe your prayers will comfort me?
Do you believe your kisses give me hope?
And Do you think your touch will lift my spirits?

Honestly, Do you think your strong enough to break my chains.....

(If you liked or didnt like this poem, drop me a line, i like to hear from people)

Kuroi Jofune the Pirate
PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:51 am


Well, I certainly like it. 3nodding

very evocative.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:57 pm


Wow. What a strong piece! I adore it.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 2:46 pm


the sadness runs in my veins
and it wanna stay
that is what i feel inside
and i wanna put it out.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:00 pm


Both thumbs up for that ...

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 3:38 pm


I liked it. At the end it seemed as though you were talking to someone close to you. Not anyone in general, but someone who tried to comfort you in a way. Right? sweatdrop

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