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 Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:17 pm
Hi, guys! This is my first post in the guild. sweatdrop
Alrighty! So, I was quickly glancing over the titles of all the poems and noticed that they were all kinda depressing sounding. So, I'm writing this poem right off of the top of my head and typing it as I think of it and trying to not do something that's like "My bleeding heart longs for you" or anything like that. Okay? Okay!
All your words are so depressing,
Your song just seem... emo.
All you words seem so thoughtless,
and I thought you should know.
Life is not as empty.
Life is not so sad.
Life is not so happy.
With your death in my mind,
I wait.
I wait for your return.
Life is like a road,
And you are the wheel.
Although you are beaten by the road
You must continue, no matter how you feel.
How was that?
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 11:57 am
well sweetie i should tell you
that all are welcome here
and although slightly judjemental
your poem was good to hear
To respond to someones post
using poetry as prose
may sound odd or strange, but kid,
That's who i am, you know?
So all in all its very good
But lets get one thing clear
if people mourn by poetry,
don't judge them, ok dear?
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 6:15 pm
MimmMimm well sweetie i should tell you that all are welcome here and although slightly judjemental your poem was good to hear To respond to someones post using poetry as prose may sound odd or strange, but kid, That's who i am, you know? So all in all its very good But lets get one thing clear if people mourn by poetry, don't judge them, ok dear?
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 9:34 pm
MimmMimm well sweetie i should tell you that all are welcome here and although slightly judjemental your poem was good to hear To respond to someones post using poetry as prose may sound odd or strange, but kid, That's who i am, you know? So all in all its very good But lets get one thing clear if people mourn by poetry, don't judge them, ok dear? That's coo'. f.y.i. You are now officially awesome in my book. ^_^ I'm not really judging, just noticing. Thanks for the feedback!
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:19 am
No problem dude. just that you could have trodden on a few tails there. xd you're pretty awesome yourself
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:03 pm
Thank you all so much for writing happy poems! 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 12:40 am
Uhm... I have a different principle but your poem is good... sweatdrop
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