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You need to put some more red or white on the bottom to even it out. May I suggest the Sheer Stockings?

Your hair is silver. Maybe get a the black version.

And the gloves are too clean for the rest of the avatar. I would suggest the White Medical Gloves instead.

The Whip is also out of place. It has an orange/brown color.

6/10

Maybe getting some HIPster Red Tint Shades and Roco Rochel Costume Bracelet would add a bit of Pizzaz.

I felt like Tekteking what it would look like if you did all of what I said so you could look at it and decide whether you like it or not.

I think your dream avi (or whatever it is..) is really cute ^_^ Although I don't think the wip really goes too well. If you decide to lose the wip, you should add something red (of some sort) by your feet =) 9/1o

eh...nothing real special...srry. 6/10