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PostPosted: Sat Oct 10, 2015 2:21 pm
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      Username:Juubi-Kira no Ryuu
      Name:Harvey Jay Bennett
      Age:23
      Gender: Male
      Sexual Orientation: Demisexual
      Ethnicity: Caucassian
      Height:5'10''
      Weight: 130 lbs
      Theme Song: You're gonna go far kid

P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

      Personality: Harvey is fairly mature for his age, coming from a household where the parents acted more like children than the children themselves. Due to being younger than his colleagues he acts very professional around them and can be closed off and distant; Despite how extroverted and charismatic he is, very few people can claim to actually know him.
      He loves his motorcycle and sometimes despite being mature can act his age, particularly if he's with friends, however this only happens if you catch him outside a work environment. He tends to keep to himself around other teachers due to fearing his age will make them not take him seriously. He can come off a bit full of himself due to being the smart kid in class most of his life. He has a lot of patience for children and knows better than to be patronizing to them due to his own rebellious years and being the youngest in a myriad of situations. He's very passionate about genetics and will talk your ear off. He's a very extroverted person and enjoys talking to people. He loves challenging himself and is determined to get the best experience out of whatever he throws himself at.

      Strengths: . He is fairly independent and is used to handling things himself. He knows how to act professional and check things at the door. He's been in advanced classes since high school and is very knowledgeable in his field. He has a lot of patience for children and knows how to get to their level and talk to them without coming off as patronizing. He's very charismatic and as he becomes more at ease with you is a fun guy to hang around. He loves talking about his field which makes him good at interactive teaching.

      Harvey is also cunning and very resourceful, if there’s a way he can do something that is easier or at least more practical than the typical way he will become determined to find it and put it into effect. He's an opportunist above all and prefers methods in which he gains the most while sacrificing the least. It was this resourcefulness that prompted him to research accelerated degrees and online classes and find ways to graduate early with the requirements he needed and which has allowed him to succeed despite his shortcomings.
      He's fairly ambitious, not really torn up at leaving his friends ( his reasoning is he can make more) to get where he wants to go.
      Weaknesses:.
      Due to his independence, Harvey is used to handling things himself, which can make it hard to admit when he does needs help or ask for and take advice from other adults. It also makes him slow to listen, He still resents his family and despite letting go of his anger still doesn’t want to talk to them Due to his age he keeps his guard up around other teachers because he doesn't want them to see him as a kid. This results in him not letting people in and gives him a hard time making friends with his colleagues. Because he's been the smart kid in class since High School, he can come off a bit full of himself and a know-it-all (especially about his field) this further alienates him from others. Despite how smart he is, he can be unsure of how to act in certain situations especially if he's inexperienced in it. While he’s good with kids, parents are a whole other story.(he hopes to get better thou)
      Harvey has also had a fairly unstable home life particularly during his childhood years and it has resulted in him being almost unable to form concrete bonds (such as friendships and familial ties). When they do happen, he's not the best at maintaining them, even when he wants to.
      Since he put his ambitions first and never really settling anywhere, he doesn’t coop well and becomes bored and restless when he’s stuck in the same place for too long.


      Biography: Harvey was born the second child to Nicholas and Adelle Bennett (nee Trafton). The younger of two brothers, he was a reckless child who would have gotten tagged with middle child syndrome despite having no younger siblings. His home life was less than ideal, his mother had issues including a drug habit which made her extremely irrational. Often times Adelle would throw screaming fits and throw things around the house leading to screaming matches between her and her husband whenever he intervened. She finally got taken away due to substance abuse and causing enough disturbances, leaving him with his father and older brother.
      While his father was well intentioned he was often immature and worked long hours in construction to keep his kids fed and well, this led to Harvey and his brother learning to fend for themselves in most things. Growing up as latchkey kids, no one checked their homework or set their curfew. Both boys grew up dictating their own rules and making their own decisions without much, if any parental supervision. At the very least they could say it was -kinda-peaceful.
      This wasn’t to last however, not even a year later their dad remarried, something Harvey still considers a rushed decision, if not an outright mistake. Things got more hectic around the house. Harvey's step-mother did not get along with Harvey and his brother. The boys were used to doing things their way, and she took that personally. Harvey in particular would often butt heads with her, not liking at all that someone he had just met was trying to butt herself into his life. This would often lead to her fighting with his dad and his dad fighting with Harvey. While his brother kept calm and focused on his studies and his new-found girlfriend (often escaping to her place to get away from the madness at home.) Harvey took to biking, sometimes out of town. He also more often than not took to acting and lashing out. He'd curse out his dad's wife, get in fights and got sent home with an officer Jenny on more than one occasion.

      Things eventually took a turn for the worse in Harvey's 12th year. After a particularly nasty fight which ended in Harvey trying to run away and getting taken home by an officer Jenny, Harvey’s now pregnant step-mother convinced her husband to send Harvey away. He was sent to live with his mother who was out of rehab and living in Canalave City with a live in boyfriend. Said boyfriend, a nameless trainer Harvey doesn’t even bother to remember eventually left the mother and son for a shot at living his dream as a trainer and challenging the gyms.
      His mother for her part had developed depression and against everyone’s advice continued to date. With a long line of less than desirable suitors constantly in his home, and a mother who acted like she was a lovestruck teenager half the time and an old miserable woman the other half, Harvey often felt like the grown up in the household, filing out food stamp forms sorting through the mail and buying groceries when his mom forgot. Other times however he was just a scared kid, hiding out in the docks until he could go home without having to fear screams, meltdowns, and sometimes downright abuse from his mother or the many men that came through their lives. More often than not he was tempted to jump on a boat and never look back, he actually tried to once and the screaming match that followed once he was caught and his mother found out left him with a smack to the face and the realization that if he wanted out, he needed to be smart about it. The only benefit he could think of was that life at his mom's held even less rules than living with his dad.

      School was the only thing that went somewhat okay, Harvey discovered that making friends was a science. Charisma and good timing would win people over and once he had the formula he became rather social. He wasn't close to any of them but the kids he hung out with made life bearable and allowed him to forget about the hell that was home. He spent most of his time with them, and when one of those friends offered to take him to sandgem on a trip with his folks Harvey found that friends also meant opportunities and that opportunities could take him places outside of Canalave. Actually going to school was a drag for him and he'd much rather spend his time doing things he enjoyed like hanging out with friends and exploring the outskirts of the city but he saw it as a necessary evil. He loved the freedom that came with biking on his own and having no one to answer to and the desire to travel and never have to come home only grew. He was constantly googling ways out of town and kept a map on his wall. At his most desperate moments, he considered joining the military, becoming a trainer (much as he hated them) becoming a ranger, anything to get out as soon as possible. He hated the idea of spending time on something he didn't care about, and so each of this options was discarded for something that would require less commitment and more gratifying results.

      Entering high school he saw a chance to leave the city. With some research Harvey found out there was a way to graduate early by taking the core classes that the school required from graduates. He loved the idea of leaving school early, as opposed to wasting four years in general education and more to the point, staying four more years with his mother. Meeting with a counselor, research in hand Harvey asked what the fastest track out of school was. The answer was either a GED or accelerated classes. Harvey figured with a high school diploma, he could at least work part time in a pokemart somewhere and would have more opportunities for a trade school should he wish for one, so he picked the second choice.

      When he was in his junior year, his mother's depresion got progresevely worse. Harvey was forced to miss massive amounts of school and eventually was forced to drop out. He opted to enroll in an online school to make up the remainder of his credits since he was mostly done anyways. Due to taking accelerated classes his freshman and sophomore years as well as AP classes, he graduated high school early, and enrolled at a college in Solaceon a few months shy of his 16th birthday applying for financial aid and a couple of scholarships to take care of books and tuition. It was during this year that things at his mother's got progresevely worse. a few weeks after he graduated Harvey found himself in a living situation he just couldn't handle. After his mother's current boyfriend threw a vase at his head and threathened to beat him next time he saw him, Harvey got on his bike, took his pet chimchar, a bag, and a knife with him(for protection) and took off without a backwards glance. He had to be in Solaceon by next fall he figured, why not get an early start? (not to mention keep himself umbeaten)

      WIth high school done and an entire summer before starting college classes, he made good on what he wanted and driftred through Sinnoh during the summer drafting a route that would eventually lead him to Solaceon. He worked at corner stores, and odd jobs when he needed to. He loved seeing the sights and meeting people and made the decicion that he would continue to do so as much as he was permitted to. He considered blowing off college and continuing to drift but an alarmingly light wallet and the idea of ending up on a dead end job motivated him to follow through with his plan. He obtained a cheap albeit slighly shady place to stay via craigslist and headed to Solaceon to start his classes.

      ArrIving in Solaceon Harvey found himself living with a shady room mate that made him glad he had a knife on him and going to the local college for a degree in business. He took mostly online and lecture classes, wanting -and needing- free time. As usual he looked for the easiest way to accomplish his goal and opted for session 2 and 4 classes which were more intensive but left him with more free time since they only met once a week and lasted three months. Business didn't entice him but he knew if he picked the right career he'd have free time even after he was out of college and the ability to travel which was why he picked it. He picked up a job at the daycare to save up money and took roadtrips from time to time, usually during the free week between terms but sometimes while taking all-online or easy classes. At some point in his 2 year stay in Solaceon, his bike was damaged and he invested on a motorcycle one of his friends was selling. This made the trips go by faster, even though the daycare lady got onto him for blowing off his last four paychecks, not to mention driving without a helmet.

      Charismatic by nature, Harvey managed to endear himself to the couple at the daycare while in Solaceon. They often let him eat dinner with them and eventually let him stay with them. It was there that he first took an interest in breeding and asked the couple who worked there for some information on it. He also asked people who dropped their pokemon general questions about the subject and got to learn quite a bit about it. After he had looked up enough information he became fascinated by it and decided he could be happy pursuing it as a career. Looking up different programs, he talked to the college counselor and took the nessesary classes to pursue a carreer path in breeding and genetics.

      By age 18 he had finished his Associates and was starting his Bachelor's. Harvey decided to aim for a respectable college in Kanto, applying at a college in Saffron, due to the University there having an Accelerated Bachelor’s program. The daycare couple, who had grown fond of him arranged for him to work with the daycare couple in Kanto. He stayed in Canalave for a few weeks checking if his mother was still alive, before shipping out from Hoenn's port city on a boat headed straight for Kanto's port. WIth Broski on his shoulder, Harvey made his way to Saffron.

      He attended college on campus but tried to take as many classes online as possible since by now, classrooms felt weird to him (although he couldn't completely escape them and wound up taking at least 40% of them on campus). It was in Saffron that he developed his liking for the game corner which had been upgraded to having darts and a pool table which he frequented whenever he could with other kids from the college. He loved the city and how it never seemed to sleep, how different it was from Canalave and even Solaceon. He particularly loved driving his bike around the city, even if for as short as 10-15 minute drives and found that they helped clear his head. He did this a lot particularly during exams, papers, and dates.

      It was also around this time that he began to slowly change, he was still a teenager and still wasn't crazy about his parents ( he was still angry at them both and his step-mother still wasn't his favorite) but now that he was happy he was able to not let the past control him as much and didn't act out as much. He barely noticed, too busy earning his degree and getting to know the city. He continued to try to take occasional roadtrips usually to Celadon or Cerulean but only managed a few before he had to give them up three months into the program as his degree started really picking up. Ever recourceful and always on the lookout for new oportunities (not to mention slightly manic from staying in one place too long) he did manage to arrange a few trips with the college (study abroad oportunities, zoology and breeding conferences, workshops, and the like which were offered to students in the college and counted towards their credits) Unless his classes were involved however, his bike never went farther than the next town over until he was done with his degree.

      During his first Spring Break in Saffron Harvey took a roadtrip to Fuchsia city with some kids from his college. It was there that he met his best friend, a part of the Joy family who was studying medicine in the local community college. After the worst of his classes were over Harvey was itching to get on his bike again and see new sights. Influenced in part by his new friendship he found and applied for a paid internship in the Fuchsia city pokemon zoo 6 months shy of finishing his degree and stayed there during the remainder of his Bachelor's, working part time at a poke-mart to make ends meet. Due to the accelerated program Harvey’s bachelor’s took two years to gain and at 20 years old Harvey Jay Bennet had a B.A.S in pokemon Zoology. He remained working at the zoo for the remainder of the summer, going on the ocasional ride on his days off, before the need to challenge himself and change his scenery got to him.

      Harvey decided to pursue a Masters in genetics and breeding and attended a University in Unova that fall looking for scholarships and shortcuts to help himself along. While there he found out about Academies and the opportunities they offered. His interest was peaked and he decided to double major, earning his teacher credentials in 3 years (the longest he's stayed in a city) before focusing again on his Masters. Shortly after, he was told by his teacher about Ordell academy and the benefits and oprortunitues that it would grant him ( Tenure for one, and as an adjunct teacher he would only have one class which would give him free time as well as no summer classes, not to mention getting to know the city.) Never one to turn away from opportunities and always up for a change of scenery(and region) Harvey applied

      It was around this time that his father called him, someone Harvey had not heard from in more than 10 years.

      The call was long and included apologies on both sides, no longer the angry kid he used to be Harvey was slightly, only slightly more willing to listen. The process that had started in Saffron and had only progressed since then had allowed him to at least understand his father a bit better. He still wasn't crazy about the guy but when he asked him to look after his half-brother, explaining that his wandering was worrying, he told his father to enroll Marcus in Ordell saying this would benefit him and keep him from wandering too much. He also, after being told some sensitive information, begrudgingly promised to keep an eye on the kid. A promise he's not too sure on keeping since he's not very close to the boy and is still fairly distant from him and his family in general. He is very excited to have this opportunity and is eager to learn what teaching will mean for him. While genetics is still his passion, and he plans to continue to study it and eventually finish his Master's, this is an adventure for him and he can't wait to see where it takes him.
      Hometown:Eterna City
      Likes:
          ↦Playing pool
          ↦Basketball
          ↦Genetics
          ↦Meeting new places and people
          ↦Having free time
          ↦His motorcycle
          ↦Taking rides in his Motorcycle

      Dislikes:
          ↦People telling him what to do(especially if they're pushy about it)
          ↦Having no one to talk to
          ↦Paperwork(the bane of every teacher and researcher)
          ↦drugs(due to his mother doing drugs when he was a kid)
          ↦Not knowing what to do
          ↦Patronizing people
          ↦Irrational and stupid people
          ↦When Samantha nags him

S C H O O L - I N F O R M A T I O N (This section will be filled out later)

      House:
      Dorm Room:
      Class Taught: Breeding
      Clubs:
      Goals: To become known in the breeding and genetics comunity
      To make the best out of his teaching experience and perform to the best of his abilities.
      To live a full life filled with intersting places and people, and never stop challenging himself.

P O K E M O N
      ► P A R T Y
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        Pokemon: Broski (Monferno)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender:Male
        Level:50
        Nature:Rash
        Ability:Iron Fist
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Flame Wheel
            ►Close Combat
            ►Thunder Punch
            ►Blaze KIck

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        Pokemon: Tank (Electivire)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender: Male
        Level:49
        Nature:Brave
        Ability: Motor Drive
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Thunderbolt
            ►Discharge
            ►Meditate
            ►Discharge

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        Pokemon: Samantha (Slowking)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender:Female
        Level:50
        Nature:Mild
        Ability:Regenerator
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Zen Headbutt
            ►Water Pulse
            ►Heal Pulse
            ►Trump Card



I N V E N T O R Y (Do not fill in this section)
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      ► M E D I C I N E :




      ► B E R R I E S :





      ► K E Y - I T E M S :




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sources for early graduaton, accelerated degrees and study abroad programs: x x x x(as well as personally knowing students who did it)  
PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2015 11:07 am
And now you’ll lead the way
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Harvey Jay Bennet
-Breeding Teacher-


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Harvey rode into town, parking his bike by the house he knew belonged to Elaine. He had spent some time in southern Sinnoh, but apart from saying hello to the daycare couple in Solaceon found he mostly just wanted to come to see his friend and make sure she was alright.
After seeing his father and step mother, his mood for the region as a whole had soured. All he could really think about was what it had been like to wander around it as a kid. To know that fear most children had of their parents not wanting them because of a new sibling, was real for him.
The idea of even checking in on his mother had made him want to drive himself off a cliff after that, so he had bygone Cavalane entirely and headed straight north. The ride had done him good, seeing the green scenery of Eterna fade to shrubbery and later snow had made him feel like he wasn't just putting distance between himself and Eterna but also
The dragon attack had left Elaine hurt, he had stayed with her for as long as possible but then he had found out Marcus had been hurt and-
Harvey hadn't exactly known what it was that he felt when he had found out Marcus had been hurt....worried? He had been worried. Guilty? Over what? It wasn't his fault.
But whatever the case he had stayed with the kid and made sure he was okay-how exactly he got it in his head it was a good idea to go against a Tyranitar Harvey did't even know. He had kept tabs on Elly but had been focused on Marcus and then calling his parents and getting him home.
So now here he was, ready to see someone he actuallyconsidered family.
Picking his bag and hanging his helmet on the motorcycle, Harvey went up to the door and knocked.











P O K E M O N

      ► P A R T Y
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        Pokemon: Broski (Monferno)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender:Male
        Level:50
        Nature:Rash
        Ability:Iron Fist(hidden ability)
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Flame Wheel
            ►Close Combat
            ►Thunder Punch
            ►Blaze KIck

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        Pokemon: Tank (Electivire)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender: Male
        Level:49
        Nature:Brave
        Ability: Motor Drive
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Thunderbolt
            ►Discharge
            ►Meditate
            ►Discharge

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        Pokemon: Samantha (Slowking)
        Friendship Points:
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        Gender:Female
        Level:50
        Nature:Mild
        Ability:Regenerator(hidden ability)
        Experience:
        Move Set:

            ►Zen Headbutt
            ►Water Pulse
            ►Heal Pulse
            ►Trump Card






Nice work you did
You’re gonna go far, kid


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2015 12:51 pm
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Thank you for your patience. I will start my review now, if you have any questions then you're welcome to quote me here, but please remember that my review is meant to keep things balanced in the guild. If I ask you to change or remove something it is for your benefit and my decision will not likely change, but I can provide you with an explanation.

Anyways let us begin:

1) Spell Checking: Please go over your profile and proofread everything. There are some words that are mispelled and get caught off and fuse with other words so please look over your profile and spell check everything. Also the Biography is a bit hard to read because you're making paragraphs from one or two sentences so please properly put everything together.

2) Mentioning of Brother: I understand that this character is your student character's older half-brother and therefore will have lots of involvement with each other. You say "Like his brother" too many, this leads me to believe that you are comparing their strengths and weaknesses too much. You must be able to separate your two characters from each other otherwise I will suspect favoritism of one student over another. You will need to remove any mention of his brother when you're talking about his personality, strengths, and weaknesses.

3) Chocovine City: This is an anime-exclusive location so I must ask you to change this to a different place. Anime-exclusive areas or game areas from Pokemon Coliseum/pokemon rangers are not allowed to be used. This is mentioned in the "Ordell Academy Guide" topic.

4) Age: I can see that your character is well traveled and many things happened in his life. I must ask you to properly match his age with all these experiences he has had. He's traveled to many places, got a degree through online courses, and somehow managed to include free time for himself to goof off and have a good time. I am not saying these are impossible tasks to accomplish, but this would match a person whose closer to their 30s or middle 20s, but not early 20s. I know you wanted to make him younger than everyone, but with the amount of things he has accomplished or done it just does not match his age. He will need to be 24 years old at the very least.

5) Biography: I will need you to remove the last paragraph of your biography, the part that includes his explanation for being late to Ordell as well as Marcus because there are too many wrong things with that. All you need to say is that he was late due to transportation issues and that's all. Also I need you to remove the mentioned of scholarships. Ordell Academy is not a place where the students or parents have to pay some kind of tuition. So please do not say that Harvey was the reason for Marcus entering the academy. Your character does not possess that power.

6) Strengths/Weaknesses: Some of the things you said in his personality are the exact same things you are saying for his strength/weaknesses. Please either rephrase it or remove them since it is too repetitive.

7) Pokemon: A pokemon cannot have two abilities, you can only pick one so choose either their normal ability or the hidden ability, but not both.

Once you are done making these changes then please quote me once more and I will review it again. Thank you.  
PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 5:30 pm
Juubi-Kira no Ryuu
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I fixed the pokemon and hopefully the biography is up to par, as wel as the strenghts and weaknesses. I also added a few, further separating him from his brother.
I also took out most of the travels except for him running away and university transfers and took away the Master's degree (you only need a Bachelor's to teach high school and below anyways) and explained how he went about finding accelerated classes and dual enrollment so hopefully his biography matches his age now.
Please let me know if I need to fix anything else...I wasn't sure what you meant by 'putting everything together' so if the bio's still hard to read let me know.
Thank you for giving me the chance to post as a teacher, I really appreciate i and look 3nodding

(edited, sorry if the posts are a bit short sometimes, I usually post at the library between classes so they're kind of rushed. I had to pack my bags for Orlando today so I had to wait to edit.)


Thank you for making the appropriate changes. I read over everything and unfortunately I am still having trouble believing his age matching the things he has accomplished.

I don't doubt that a person can become a teacher and have finished college early all by the age of 23 under normal circumstances. However, your character is not going through any normal circumstances.

You have him dropping out of high school, running away from him, constantly moving from one place to another and yet somehow he's able to keep up with his online classes, work, and time to enjoy the pleasantries of city life.

To be honest, I don't mind all of the things he has done. I think he's a really interesting character, but his age just does not match with those experiences.

I know you want to make him the "young teacher" in the academy, but you're doing too much with him. I will ask again to please change his age to 25 or older. Normally he would be 26 at least, but since you're set on making him be young then this is all I can do.

Another solution that I can give you is to not have him run away from home. It makes more sense that for him to stay in his house while finishes his online high school courses. Once he finishes those online classes, you can have him move out when he enters a college and him being 23 becomes more believable with that accelerated bachelor's program.

These are the only two options I can give you. Please choose one and let me know so that this profile can finally be approved 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 10:34 pm
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I fixed the pokemon and hopefully the biography is up to par, as wel as the strenghts and weaknesses. I also added a few, further separating him from his brother.
I also took out most of the travels except for him running away and university transfers and took away the Master's degree (you only need a Bachelor's to teach high school and below anyways) and explained how he went about finding accelerated classes and dual enrollment so hopefully his biography matches his age now.
Please let me know if I need to fix anything else...I wasn't sure what you meant by 'putting everything together' so if the bio's still hard to read let me know.
Thank you for giving me the chance to post as a teacher, I really appreciate i and look 3nodding

(edited, sorry if the posts are a bit short sometimes, I usually post at the library between classes so they're kind of rushed. I had to pack my bags for Orlando today so I had to wait to edit.)


Thank you for making the appropriate changes. I read over everything and unfortunately I am still having trouble believing his age matching the things he has accomplished.

I don't doubt that a person can become a teacher and have finished college early all by the age of 23 under normal circumstances. However, your character is not going through any normal circumstances.

You have him dropping out of high school, running away from him, constantly moving from one place to another and yet somehow he's able to keep up with his online classes, work, and time to enjoy the pleasantries of city life.

To be honest, I don't mind all of the things he has done. I think he's a really interesting character, but his age just does not match with those experiences.

I know you want to make him the "young teacher" in the academy, but you're doing too much with him. I will ask again to please change his age to 25 or older. Normally he would be 26 at least, but since you're set on making him be young then this is all I can do.

Another solution that I can give you is to not have him run away from home. It makes more sense that for him to stay in his house while finishes his online high school courses. Once he finishes those online classes, you can have him move out when he enters a college and him being 23 becomes more believable with that accelerated bachelor's program.

These are the only two options I can give you. Please choose one and let me know so that this profile can finally be approved 3nodding

Would him running ir getting taken away to a friend or a group home work? He'd still finish H.S. in the same place and a lot of his issues would make sensr.

If not I'll pick the second option and keep Harvey 23.
The profile will be changed tonight or tomorrow depending on when I get back to my room(kinda on my phone rn. Sorry)
Thank you for your patience smile

I think the easiest is option 2 to be honest.

just have him stay with his mother until he finishes high school and then you can have him leave to college and that'll be the easiest fix. Thank you  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2015 2:23 pm
Juubi-Kira no Ryuu


Thank you for your patience 3nodding I appreciate it.

Your teacher profile is officially approved ^^ I will be posting your character in the teacher roster, assign him a room, and a House.

Your character has just arrived to the academy. You must post him in either the Campus Train Station or Lamia District's Train Station and this post must consist of him arriving at the academy. You cannot say that he has been present already in the day.

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JubiJujubi

Anxious Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:43 pm
okemon


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    Pokemon: Broski (Monferno)
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    Gender:Male
    Level:50
    Nature:Rash
    Ability:Iron Fist
    Experience:
    Move Set:
        ►Flame Wheel
        ►Close Combat
        ►Thunder Punch
        ►Blaze Kick


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Pokemon: Tank (Electivire)
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Gender:
Male
Level:49
Nature:
Brave
Ability: Motor Drive
Experience:
Move Set:

►Thunderbolt
►Discharge
►Meditate
►Discharge


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Pokemon: Samantha (Slowking)
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Gender:Female
Level:50
Nature:Mild
Ability:Regenerator(hidden ability)
Experience:
Move Set:
►Zen Headbutt
►Water Pulse
►Heal Pulse
►Trump Card



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:55 pm
tems



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JubiJujubi

Anxious Gekko


JubiJujubi

Anxious Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:57 pm
PC
 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:58 pm
Ϲ lass Ɍ oster


Year 1



Chessebelle Blair
Teacher Notes:

Tristan Daniels
Teacher Notes:Seems a bit asocial. Tends to skip class a lot. Doesn't seem to get along with other students.

Skylar Moore
Teacher Notes: Diligant and reserved. Doesn't work with people unless it's nessesary. Always turns her work in on time.

Chael Riverton
Teacher Notes: Sharp. Quick to ask questions. Advanced for his age (?) He certainly seems aware of the darker parts of trainer culture. Always does extra credit; Meticulous note-taking.

Ichiro Sato
Teacher Notes: Friendly and amicable. Seems to enjoy the class. Not much to say.

Ethan Kirito Soul
Teacher Notes: Has not been to a single class. Sent a letter to the Dean.

Maria Taylor
Teacher Notes: Highly interested in breeding. Pays extra attention whenever professional breeding comes up. Might recommend higher level reading in regards to breeding as a career, Not a social butterfly but still talks to people.

Issac Weiss
Teacher Notes: Not much to say.  

JubiJujubi

Anxious Gekko


JubiJujubi

Anxious Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 9:01 pm
Syllabus


Weeks 1
Breeding Introduction/Syllabus handout

What is Breeding, a short look at breeding.
Basics of Breeding:



Week 2
Different Types of Breeding ; Gender counterpart species
Different Types of Breeding ; Breeding Among the same Species.
Different Types of Breeding; Breeding Separate Species

Incense Breeding


Week 3-4
Inheriting Natures
Inheriting Abilities
Inheriting Stats


Week 5-6
Passing Moves Down

Week 7-8
Egg Groups

Week 8-9
Hatching an Egg

Week 9-10
Chain Breeding



*Quizzes will be given at the end of every week

Lesson today : Stats/Passin moves down. Egg groups.( presentation)

Future Lessons: Hatching your own egg
visiting the day care to watch eggs hatch
Pokemon Care_Again lessons at the Daycare
Presentations_One Egg group per day.
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