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Silent
Searching
The moon dripping with eternal glow
Small hope
Small faith
Small wonder
Silent
Shifting
The moon liftings its curse mystere
To sigh
To plead
To die
Silent
Screaming
The moon flashing with its cold scorn
Accuse
Forgive
Repent
Silent
Stretching
The moon turning its saddening light
The lost
The stolen
The pained
- by SombrePresence |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/15/2012 |
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- Title: Repent
- Artist: SombrePresence
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- Date: 09/15/2012
- Tags: repent moon
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SombrePresence - 10/12/2012
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@epopoeia
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Thank you for the advice and compliment. I shall definitely take that into consideration.
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- dfsgfbsgbdfgsfgergergerg - 10/10/2012
- The repetitive lyrics add much purpose to the poem. I do think this poem does show a bit too much "silence" though. You should truly open it up and make the poem shout out at the reader in order to keep their attention. Keep up the good writing!
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