Pain

• Artist: Sasorisheart
• Description: This is a very old poem that i wrote when i was younger :)
  It's quite dark and it's titled 'Pain' so you can think what you wish of it... Enjoy!
• Date: 07/02/2012
• Tags: pain sorrow stars shine scars

The shining of stars streches so far
If only though they could cover scars.
What scars you say?

There may be nothing there
But for in my mind...
Oh you would never care!
The fear that's deep
Burrowing inside
Keeps me remembering
Why
I hate life.

All the pain.
the sorrow too
Left behind for more than due.
Though
I'm used to it now
It's all the same
That my feelings are always pain.

Comments

[dfsgfbsgbdfgsfgergergerg]

This piece of writing has a meaning purpose and I believe it is a good start. I wonder if you could possibly elaborate and create something new starting with this as your root? It is quite a relative piece for many teenagers nowadays and I think it is a wonderful thing to write. Keep on writing.

[I A m u I]

thats amazing:] i think lots of people can probrbly relate to this

[TheL0st1]

very nice, dark and meaningful. i can relate to this poem i had very hard times in my life from when i was in first grade till i was a freshman in highschool