loves tidal wave.

• Artist: Clawed Darkness
• Description: i wrote this poem for another site but felt like sharing it here its a short one though.
  and i don't mind your criticism any good remark is a thoughtful remark.
• Date: 03/23/2012
• Tags: loves tidal wave

Love is Like a giant tidal wave it pulls you deeper and deeper in until suddenly WOOSH your pushed out, with sudden shock your heart it throbs fast at the same beat of the sound of the waves when they crash.
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[Clawed Darkness]

i gave myself an honest rating of 3 stars because i personally know its not my best poem but i did write this quite a few years back when i went through and an emotional state were i got into, poetry.