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I lost my true love, now I live in Hell.
Whipped on my back as I lay in my cell
Assulted through speech, some too crude to tell
Never to see her to break this cruel spell
Through the flames I tumbled and fell
Thrashing and smashing about in my jail
Only on she can a hope for my bail
Don't count on it, though, her heart is too frail
It's so close, though might as well be in Brail
Even though I smile, I still live in Hell
- by User_10273415 |
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- | Submitted on 08/12/2011 |
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- Title: Hell
- Artist: User_10273415
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Description:
A short poem I wrote on September 27, 2010 for someone because they wanted to see a poem with a subliminal message in it. xP
If you can see it then congrats, it's not hard to find. lol.
*EDIT* The message is not directed at me, I'm not a little depressive. It's from the character in the story's point of view and what he wants while going through this.
- Date: 08/12/2011
- Tags: hell
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Comments (6 Comments)
- slg kitten13 - 08/15/2011
- amazing 5/5
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- Jadis the Immortal - 08/14/2011
- agai i feel ashamed of my work compared to urs... damn artistic talent doesnt stop at anime photos... why have i no talent for stuff i love like these poems?... in other words ur poems rock
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- Jadis the Immortal - 08/14/2011
- agai i feel ashamed of my work compared to urs... damn artistic talent doesnt stop at anime photos... why have i no talent for stuff i love like these poems?... in other words ur poems rock
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- XxJenn_BabiixX - 08/13/2011
- Wow, u really have talent of writing!!
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- Forsaken Love T_T - 08/12/2011
- your poems are perfection
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- iLYrics - 08/12/2011
- ..Youre just amazing.
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