nothing

• Artist: Dorky Moose
• Description: there is nothing left for this person
  
• Date: 06/28/2011
• Tags: nothing world alone take

there is nothing in this world anylonger
there is nothing in this life anylonger
everything has left me here
it has left me hear all alone
taken away what i hold dear and near
so take me in
and let me out
release my soul
and set it free
nothing left
but to let me be.

Comments

[luvzdeidara]

My only criticism is the misuse of the word "hear".
That particular word is used when you hear something.
You meant to use the homonym "here".
That word is used when referring to place.
Other than that, good poem.

[angrydarkgirl12]

hey i think that was great