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I am lost in the lonely sea
and used to hum a silent plea.
Desperate, I sung the siren's loudest tune,
because my hidden feelings had become a dark monsoon.
I was jaded, from non-genuine kings,
and destroyed your hope, your beautiful wings.
I'm sorry that I started these titanic waves
before, I just hid with you in saltwater caves.
My friend, I betrayed you, in attempt to find something more,
I threw away our friendship and watched it wash ashore.
Hoping this life was something disposable in the sea,
wishing it would become a blank, but a this is all that I will ever be.
Depression, a bottle that falls deeply into the blue, locked away
holds my message of regret, never to see its journey's last day.
- by slothiiiey |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/05/2011 |
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- Title: A poem of regret
- Artist: slothiiiey
- Description: constructive criticism only please.
- Date: 06/05/2011
- Tags: poem regret
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- Professor Hentai - 06/09/2011
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- AMAIxDURIMU - 06/06/2011
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Loved the rhyme scheme!! The 'AA BB CC...' scheme was basic, but you put deep thoughted words into your writing. I can tell you put a lot of heart into it, rather then thought. That is what true poetry is all about. Continue to write, you're a natural! I love to read more!
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