Have You?

• Artist: Ija Copeland
• Description: Hey everyone.. This is just something that i composed.. One day something just struck me to write this.. I dont know if its good or anything but i just post it here to see what people think of it.. So rate and leave a comment and tell me what you guys think.. Cheers!!
• Date: 12/17/2010
• Tags: have

Have you... ever feel like... the world is closing in on you...
You want to achieve something... but you cant...
Like... you want to make your dream a reality... but you know it will never be one...
Because everything's changed now...
Everything's not the same... anymore...
You feel like... you have... less and lesser time... with everyday that passed...
Everything... suddenly goes big... and you feel so small...
There's nothing more... you can do...
Except... to watch the world... slowly fading before your eyes...
Until... the only thing that you see... is blackness...
Have you?
I have... My name is Delilah... and i'm dying........

Comments

[Ija Copeland]

haha.. ok.. well, i thought it would make it more dramatic or something..lol

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

All the periods are killing me. It completely throw off the flow of the poem. Get rid of them. By the way, periods are full stops.

[Ija Copeland]

Pls tell me what you guys think of it...