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Fate wipes a tear,
As she walks in the girls wake.
Despair lends an ear,
For the frightened girls sake.
Death waits in silence,
Knows it's not his turn yet.
Hope quells the violence,
For a girl she's not met.
Destiny offers dreams,
The girl has not yet undertaken.
Love changes teams,
The girl's heart was mistaken.
Pressure was not sorry,
That it weighed down on her head.
So Sorrow took her mother's hand,
When they found out she was dead.
Death was still silent,
As he led the girl away.
Emotion claimed a young girls life,
And it happens every day.
- by ShySnowWhiteAnon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/08/2010 |
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- Title: Emotions Took Her
- Artist: ShySnowWhiteAnon
- Description: I wrote this awhile ago about someone I once knew....
- Date: 11/08/2010
- Tags: emotions take away
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Heulwen Lyall - 11/22/2010
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Sad and Beautiful
I don't know why but I really like the last four lines 5/5 - Report As Spam
- NerdyMiss - 11/08/2010
- The rythme and the word choice is slightly off. It is a really good poem, and has a great theme. 4/5
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