I die

• Artist: GothicSnow822
• Description: this poem came from the heart.
• Date: 11/07/2010
• Tags: dieing pain hurts

i'm dieing
why?
because your killing me.
you hit me
and punch me
kick me
and hurt me.
i cry and be and ask you to stop
you laugh while i cry and hit me more
"i enjoy hurting you!" you say i cry and ask
'why? why? what did i do to deserve this?"
you answer by hitting me again.
im crying more, im hurting more,
no visible bruses but i hurt, you hit my head
i pass out from the over load of trama to my head
you laeve laughing
i know its not over
it never is
you'll be back
for more
youll hit me and hurt me til im gone
youll cry when im gone and
only caue you on't have some one to tourture
you wont cry cause you miss me youll cry cause you miss seeing me in pain
thats true.
i know it
and so do you!

Comments

[GothicSnow822]

i thank you for the comment and all my poems coome from what is happening at the time. i know they arn't well put togather, i just write 'em and leave them as is. but if you had any idea what my life is lie right now you'd say ''damnn''

[Tetsugen]

A lot of pain went into this as it clearly states. Grammer here is not what matters as any poem written from the heart is meant to be just that. I do hope that this isn't of what was nor will come to pass. I want to give this a 5, I truly do but its just so tragic I would feel that giving it a 5 is like saying I like what has happened to you in your poem so I'll give it a 4 and hope you'll forgive me. You must have a pretty big heart to sustain so much.