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The way I care is so severe,
That "Love" can't be as strong
So when I say "I love you more",
I mean that we "belong"
"I love you" isn't good enough,
So I'll say what I intend
You'll always be the one I love,
And never will that end.
I'll give you all the care I have,
And be with you each day
I'll give you all I have to give,
Just promise me you'll stay.
I love you oh so very much,
That words cannot compare
So now you know "I love you" means
"I need you more than air"
The way I care is so severe that "Love" cant be as strong.
But things this pure are always sure to have a detail wrong.
Although our bond will surely break, our strings will not untie.
Time will scrape against our love, but never will it die.
Remember when I'd always say the sky was ours to share?
The sky cannot be big enough to hold how much I care.
It's sad that time must envy me, for watching in my view.
So it can never see the fact my life belongs to you.
Because of this, our future waits with sorrow in its course.
So from the start, this bond was just a set up for remorse.
- Title: The way I care 1
- Artist: Kii Marie
- Description: Love can be the most happiest thing you experiance :D then again it can be the most painful setup that you must endure :0 love is... awesome XD but in the end its sad to know that bonds will eventually break, may the seperation be caused by a fight or by death.. :0 sorry if this offends anyone out there :(
- Date: 09/22/2010
- Tags: care love romance
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ScarletNguyen - 11/25/2010
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This truely a great poem..perfect..
it touch my heart and is very sweet!
i loved it heart heart heart heart <333333
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- bram toker - 10/04/2010
- Excellent! Very sweet and pleasant to read. The second half especially was very authentic, but I thoroughly enjoyed this whole poem. Astounding work.
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- MF Doom1 - 09/26/2010
- great
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