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The crows jagged dissonant cry rips through the gentle melody of the song birds
I'm jerked to waking by it's violent unspecified contumacious protests
And misery sets in
This cruel avian will not relent
It's voice deprives me of sleep
Of sane thought
I can understand why lore depicts the crow as an evil animal
An omen of dischord
And it is
Dischord within my very soul
The crow's harsh cry unearths all the doubt I bury underneath my masks
Doubting if I'll be able to go without lashing out in violence for another second
Doubting whether or not anything I'm doing is worthwhile
Always the doubt
It's worse than anything else
People with faith sicken me
They have something I can never have
Serenity
Some kind of profound understanding of the world
But all of their "profound understandings" are total bullshit
And they know it
I would rather be miserable, than delusional
And the crow is a part of that reality
As is its banshee shreik of disdain
Which mirrors my own
For the whole world
For the entire human race
The entire human species
And every other one
But especially
The crow
- by sporosofyadah |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/03/2010 |
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- Title: The Crow
- Artist: sporosofyadah
- Description: Just ******** read it a*****e. Figure out what it's about on your own.
- Date: 08/03/2010
- Tags: crow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sporosofyadah - 08/16/2010
- I definately wasn't bible bashing. I think maybe you took some things as literal that were meant to be symbolic.
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- LikesCake - 08/15/2010
- It started strong, then you starting bible-bashing blatantly. I'd be okay with the idea if you continued with the crow idea, but it just kind of gets dropped and you rant about majority of humanity being "delusional bullshitters" and tie it back in at the end loosely. It'd be a better poem without it, imo.
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