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Stinging my skin,
Breaking within,
Kissing in the rain.
Breaking free,
Need no degree,
For me to see,
A heartbreak.
A last kiss,
Upon those very lips,
Will not be the one I put there.
I stand in the rain of tears,
Of Loosing the one that was my dear.
We danced,
We held hands,
We held each other close,
And promised never to let go.
We lied,
We cried,
We shed those tears,
And stood in the rain of fear.
So I write of true love,
One that we never had.
Of one that ends with,
them running into each other's arms.
Breathe in,
Breathe out.
Where am I now?
In a world, full of pain.
I am standing in the rain,
Of tears,
Of fears.
Of broken promises,
Of hatered.
- by Fighter2TheStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/22/2010 |
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- Title: Rain of Tears
- Artist: Fighter2TheStars
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Description:
I was in love with a guy who said he loved me back. He only said that to an awful lot of girls. And now I finally express what I've been thinking all along.
This is a song/poem. It was written in a freelance/train of thought way.
It was raining December 19th of 2009. And it is now. Bring back memories of... everything.
Comments are always welcome if they are in a constructive sort of way. - Date: 07/22/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sellesion - 07/27/2010
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Also, thanks for your comment on my art!
(Your poem = 4/5) ^w^ - Report As Spam
- Sellesion - 07/27/2010
- Good Job! I think the First three verses were wonderfully written! Keep it up!
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- Amante en Rojo - 07/27/2010
- Nice! 5/5
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- Suspicious Liquid - 07/25/2010
- great job
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- Jared_The Damned - 07/23/2010
- very wonderful. this is a great poem.
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- Fighter2TheStars - 07/22/2010
- Thank you.
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- -Kiozu- - 07/22/2010
- its very strong and deep. i guess u really loved him but he was a player. been there once and i cant forgive the past and now ruined the future id give u a 5/5
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