Just go away

• Artist: The Mad Land Monarch
• Description: guess
• Date: 07/11/2010
• Tags: just away pain realization heartache

This ain't easy to say
But please get out of my way
My heart is black and blue
I can't take you anymore

Tell me what I should do
So I can let go of you
I'm stuck with all this grief
And all these painful memories
Please just go away

I need you out of my head
Because my heart is dead
I'm filled with all the heartache
Of love long since rejected

Tell me what I should do
So I can let go of you
I'm stuck with all this grief
And all these painful memories
Please just go away

I don't need you anymore
I wish I knew this all before
My heart is in such pain
So it's best if you just go away

I need you out of my head
I need you out of my way
I need to let go of you
So please just go away
Please just go away
Please just go away

Comments

[vanille123]

wow!!! that's great!!! please write more!!! smile

[~The Random Fairie~]

This is an example of wrist-slasher.
Pro's: The beginning is decent, I like the portion from "tell me" to "Please just go away." That's a good bit, keep that.
Con's: Edit the repetition, short and original is better than longer and repetitive.

[Sincerely Metalhead]

Damn. Depressing. I'm not liking it, but it is decent...Ah, you get a 2.

[GinjaSmile]

thats amazing, and good, and true, and... idk, its really just reality