Boy/Girl Poem...

• Artist: Christa Allexis
• Description: haha xD truth
• Date: 07/09/2010
• Tags: boygirl poem

I got a new haircut; I hope he notices

Something’s different about her; cant figure out what it is

Comments

[Rawrritskathyy]

This seems a bit incomplete. Add a little bit more, I have to agree with Deadlylight6.

[Deadlylight6]

well seeing im a guy, i have to admit that yes, we can be oblivious to things. but this isnt really a poem. wheres the detail, the imagry, feelings, the resovle??? missing many things that a poem needs to live.