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I truthfully wish I could be Alice
Falling blindly into a mystic wonderland
Dwell inside a fabulous pearl palace
Finding secret powers to help make a great stand
Bold smiles vanish like a crestent white moon
Mad hattery exposes mad hatter skills
Please don't let the small pocket watch tick noon
A white rabbit who always gets too many thrills
Befriend a smokey blue caterpillar
Sing in choirous with the beautiful wild flowers
Tweddle twin jokes are always such a killer
Mr. Dodo can enchant me for many hours
But then I would be horribly late
Late, for a very important date.
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- Title: Her Wonderland
- Artist: Airayla
- Description: I guess I wrote this poem becasue I envy Alice's ability to fantasize and then make it a reality. Wish I could do that! I know its not the greatest but Its been a few years so this is my warm up. Hope you like!
- Date: 07/01/2010
- Tags: wonderland alice wish fantasy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zuhukanah - 08/29/2012
- Ooh, a sonnet. Not bad smile
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- Jizzie Boo - 07/01/2010
- Not cheezy... Pretty kewl. Someone said it rhymed. A lil', but keep in mind, it don't have to rhyme. smile But it is good and it does go along with the story. Of what I can remember anyway. LOL smile Great job Jan!!!
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- topazchoco - 07/01/2010
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this is great! it matches perfectly with the story, and it
rhymes!! biggrin i love it! - Report As Spam