i still love you

• Artist: XxellieXxx
• Description: i suppose im just good at writing this sort of stuff i dont like writing happy poems they bore me lol
  but people who are good at writing that stuff are amazing at it
• Date: 06/03/2010
• Tags: love

i waited
i waited
you never showed

i waited
i waited
where did you go?

i waited
i waited
tears in my eyes

i waited
i waited
about to cry

you left me
you left me
standing there

you left me
you left me
without a care

how could you
how could you
you broke my heart

why did you
why did you
brake my heart

are you proud
are you proud
of what youve done?

i hate you
i hate you
for what you have done

dont forget me
dont forget me
i will never forget you

do you love me
do you love me
because i still love you
xx

Comments

[bram toker]

Completely bland and lacking in substance. Repeating the same thing over and over and over isn't creative; it's boring. Even the last line of each stanza (which are supposed to bring diversity into the poem) is completely flavorless.