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Confusion fills me....
Pain controls me....
I am void of anything
But negative emotions....
Someone help me....
Someone save me....
All these clashing emotions
Are making me unstable....
The confusion makes me unsure....
The pain tells me to do things I dont want....
I feel like a puppet towards life
And Yet I cannot break free....
The darkness envelopes me....
It dulls my mental/physical pain....
I welcome it and live in it....
I shy away from the light
For I fear the pain and confusion....
- by Yoru Inugami |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/08/2010 |
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- Title: Pain and Confusion
- Artist: Yoru Inugami
- Description: I think i was depressed when i wrote this
- Date: 05/08/2010
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- Yoru Inugami - 05/09/2010
- wells its the way i put it in my phone when i first wrote it. Plus I think that the multiple periods also show how the peron was feeling when they speak. I always tend to put multiple periods after my sentences while im depressed. Its sorta like a habit.
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- Chamomile Dream - 05/09/2010
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The copious '...' are unnecessary. It is also bad form to use a forward slash in a poem.
Signed, Alexandra. - Report As Spam
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