The one within

• Artist: Electra Dominates
• Description: i wrote this about battles with myself
• Date: 04/23/2010
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A spirit of good is nurtured inside of you
A ghost of evil is able to escape
A battle between them and you too
An everlasting emotional rape
The knot of truth and lies
The weeping and tired cries
Will anyone ever belive
That you are trying to retrieve
The one that was once within
The one with the melevolent grin
To save thier wretched lives
From a darkness that always revives
Demons and monsters are within and sometimes they cannot help but win

Comments

[HorsemanOfAlchemy]

Wow this is amazing, it shows what the soul really is. your not the only one. i've gone through this before. it was when i became a lone wolf, putting the past behind and carving out my own path.
I think that is what you were trying to do here. you had a hard decsion to make and you feel like your pulled around.
im giving you a 5/5 for expressing it through writing so well.

[DancingInAlleys]

Love it! 5/5