Surge

• Artist: MelroseHime3316
• Description: just a poem i wrote about a place that i once went to, hope u enjoy
• Date: 04/12/2010
• Tags: surge

Sunlight washes the waves,
ripples of water singe into the surface,
like a coming wave,
washes the turf,
with glistening sparkles,
the sun swallows the sand,
under the feet of the coconut tree's,
laughter erupts,
tears cease,
a day with which,
the afternoon sun is smiling down upon us.

Comments

[tealcat01]

Tres Manifique! I especially liked the 'under the feet of the coconut tree's' part...very unique