What if?

• Artist: Hana-Panda
• Description: :3
• Date: 03/30/2010
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What if?
You were nice and kind to the world.
What if?
I was the one who killed your dreams.
What if?
I never said hi to her.
What if?
I wasn't shy.
What if?
I didn't feel anger.
What if?
I lied to my parents.
What if?
I never told.
What if?
I was pretty.
What if?
I never asked for that picture.
What if?
I never said " What's wrong? "
What if?
I never told her.
What if?
I was still your friend.
What if?
I didn't sit next to you.
What if?
I...
didn't...
say...
..." Wanna be my friend Kellie? "
What would be doing?
I made her your friend... I made you...
Pretty...

Comments

[Scarlet_Teardrops]

A very interesting poem. I like it.

I like how you use "what if" and then make the statement. You may want to consider writing it in a different way, like this:

What if
I didn't sit next to you?

However, I think it's good how it is. That's part of the style of the poem, I think. Good work. ^_^