Black Tears

• Artist: TheYellowCrayonz
• Description: I was feeling kind of sad that day and I also drew a little picture for it too.
  It's about a girl who is forced to marry a man whom she does not love.
  :)
  I was in a weird mood so I used the word "thou" a bunch of times.
• Date: 03/16/2010
• Tags: black tears

Why should thou marry whom thou do not love?
Why did thou rip my heart out?
I do not feel any affection for this pitiful man.
Thou cannot force me to love this man.
Thou are evil.
Thou are selfish.
Thou are forceful.
Thou are cold-hearted.
Thou does not have a heart.
Thou threw my heart away,
Leaving me cold and empty.
I beg thou for my heart and my freedom.
I shall stand here.
Scared, alone, and unloved.
And I shall shed my black tears.
These cold black tears of hatred.

Comments

[Sunafire]

It's fine to use thou, but 'thou is' does not make grammatical sense as 'thou' generally means you. And 'you is' ? Change the is to an 'Are'
Other than that, this is a good poem smile