Fluttering Heart

• Artist: CherryGoes_POP
• Description: A poem I wrote, I have no idea if its good or not. So comment and rate please?
  Also if I spelled something wrong feel free to point it out because I am a very bad speller and I have no spell check Lol.
• Date: 03/04/2010
• Tags: love heart poem flutter bells

I can't explain
I don't even know
Why this feeling I have
I fail to show

Theres more to this
I can't subside
The way I feel
the fluttering inside

Steady Beats
Counting 1.2.3
Now going faster
Something inside of me is not complete

Always thought I'd be alone
With no one beside me
No where to call home

But now i know
I have some hope
Today is the day
That my life begins

For I see more then a figure
A person that glows
Bells ringing
And singing blue birds

Deeper inside
I see a story untold
A heart that unfolds

I can't explain
I have nothing to show
Nothing but love
Worth more then gold

This feeling I have
I never knew before
Till I met you

My one and only
Sweet singing blue bird
Heart full of gold
Belling ringing
Love

Comments

[ShadesOfLumin1996]

I like it! I mean there are a few things that could be worked on but even the greatest of authors knows that his or her work has flaws to be fixed

[CherryGoes_POP]

mmkay thanks, I fixed it

[Kombat Unit]

You spelled "something inside of my" instead of "something inside of me"...