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Falling apart,
Piece by Piece,
My tears are running,
My heart is slowing.
Im dieing now,
But it seems like no matter what,
Im dieing now,
But do you care?
Im falling down,
Into this depression,
Not coming back,
Because where Im going,
Its called Death...
- Title: Death
- Artist: Demonio69
- Description:
- Date: 02/11/2010
- Tags: death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Bloody Biography - 02/18/2010
- may have more higher rates if you fix it up a bit grammatically and spell-wise.. other than that it's ok hm. 4/5
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- Salornix - 02/13/2010
- Another awesome poem, but the topic needs to be more cheery -hugs-
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- Demonio69 - 02/11/2010
- Thank you. Maybe I should write poems when Im depressed more often
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- Taigamma - 02/11/2010
- Very nice. Quite expressive. 5/5
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