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the pencil moving across the paper
erasers destroying the marks left there.
Crinkling paper thin as a wafer.
Stars outside in the deep, dark midnight air.
A desk, littered with pages of failure,
the silent world outside is unaware.
In this story, love is the only cure
together they make a beautiful pair.
The candle flame dances in the night air,
some tiny sparks come flying up from the wick
they will land on the papers laying there
to burn them, hot and quick.
The world will not get to see
the sweet love story that was never to be.
- Title: sonnet for english
- Artist: sohi_moon
- Description: just an assignment i had for english because we are starting our shakespeare unit and i wanted to see what you guys thought of it! please give me an honest critique, i can handle it! any creative criticism is appreciated!
- Date: 01/27/2010
- Tags: sonnet english
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Suicidal-RagDoll - 02/04/2010
- wow i like it
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- Taurius Dreams - 02/01/2010
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I LOVE IT please check out my stuff i write alot of poetry and some stories i wrote then in the end gave up on so please please read my stuff and ill read all yours
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- 0_HIEN_0 - 01/30/2010
- i still like it btw people i help her with it judt so you know biggrin
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