Five Daisies

• Artist: La Petite Estelle
• Description: This is a poem I wrote for English Class,
  It's supposed to be a poem with the same theme and ryhming sheme and stuff like the poem we chose.
  I choose "Aquainted with The Dark" By Robert Frost
  It's about depression and how he hates to feel so isolated and alone when he really isn't... Please tell me on what to improve!
• Date: 01/13/2010
• Tags: five daisies depression saddness hate

Five Daisies lined up in a row
Five daisies careless and free
Bobbing their heads to and fro...

I sit here watching and waiting.
I sit here wanting to go
I sit here procrasinating.

Five daisies hurt my eyes.
Five daisies I wish would dissapear
Five Daisies look happy to my demise

It hurts to watch others be Joyful
When it hurts to feel sad and alone
It hurts to feel so isolated and misreble

Five daisies all lined up in a row...
While I sit here feeling sad and alone...

Comments

[sora wonk]

I sit here watching and waiting.
I sit here wanting to go
I sit here procrasinating.

lol. ditto. just check the spelling next time. its a great poem.

[La Petite Estelle]

So Sorry! Correction... It's "Aquainted with the Night" by Robert Frost!
My bad everyone! ^^;