You Look Good In That Color~

• Artist: Andi_lover
• Description: I have a dangerous fascination with the color red (if you can't already tell) and the guy that I know (and had a secret crush on for years) was wearing this intoxication color so on a whim the words came to me and I wrote this little love poem based on him if you will. *smiles* Tell me what you think. ^^
  
  -Andi
  
• Date: 01/08/2010
• Tags: look good color

You look good in that color I say mentally to myself as my eyes can’t help but wander. Silently creeping and invading your space. Oh how I want to reach out, to touch and gently caress that color. That intoxicating red, simple yet pure, it’s like a heart that is on fire it is so beautiful I can’t endure. It is so sexy, the color of hot, burning, and passionate love, the color of lovely roses that will be laid across my grave. Never have my eyes been attracted to you more. The color is the first thing I see. It attracts me to you. I can’t help but stare in utter fascination as that color seems to engulf you, making me want to linger and smother you. “You look good in that color,” I say again as our bodies seem to give in. Drawing us dangerously closer to one another as our air begins to mingle. You smile. That gentle smile. That smile that you already know that manages to makes me go weak. It also doesn’t help that the fact that the color you now wear seems to bounce right off of you and hit me instead. Like an arrow it has pierced my heart and made me bleed. Knowing you are in such proximity makes me want you even more. So I say again, “That color looks very good on you. Hm.” I slightly grin as I look back at you. "I wonder if it will look just as good on me." I say as I playfully wink and close in for the kill.

-Andi

Comments

[the sparr0w]

try adding paragraphs or stanzas (depending whether it's a poem or a story) because they can really add a lot to a peice or writing.

[xxX3mo HeartedXxx]

its alright

[lil cydnie]

i really like it