what you did

• Artist: girlwithagoodrighthook
• Description: ok this is ma first poem that i have ever written so cut me some slack.
  it'll probably be crap but u gotta give ma credit for trying.
• Date: 01/05/2010
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i'm walking, running, spinning, jumping
i'm laughing, crying, shouting, whining
intoxicated and restless i lie on my bed
you open the door
i barely lift my head
you pull out a gun
i don't notice.....

BANG!!!

i'm dead
with my blood on the floor you raise your head
your heart sinks as you've realised what you've done
you try to run to the door but your feet won't budge
you weep, you sulk......

BANG!!!

we're both dead now.

Comments

[-jEm-BBC]

that's sooo cool ! tragic but simple .. awesome !!