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Oh water, dark deep water,
What wonders have you in store for me?
Beneath your aquamarine depths,
What creatures flourish the tide?
Where does peace reside?
Oh deep blue water
Beautiful water,
The waves wash upon the sands of time.
I wade into the sheets of liquid sky,
Color of lustrous sapphire.
Footprints in the sand,
Your lullaby in my ears.
Ancient wonder, oh sea.
Oceans away was love.
Drowning in your sorrow.
Was she beautiful? Was she true?
Where is she now?
Why not with you, serene and calm beneath the black canvas.
Scattered stars tell the story,
You were happy with her once,
Your smile clear as the ribbons of light penetrating the surface,
Her reflection on the tears you left behind.
Where are you love?
Come fill the spaces between my fingers.
- by I_Rawr_Purple_Elephants |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/01/2010 |
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- Title: Deep Blue Recollection
- Artist: I_Rawr_Purple_Elephants
- Description: I don't think it's that good, but I just wanted to see what someone else thought.
- Date: 01/01/2010
- Tags: deep blue recollection
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Comments (1 Comments)
- iiLoKii - 01/18/2010
- Kinda crappy, I couldnt get into it because I knew where it was going, you need to make your ideas a little less one sided, make the idea complex but easy to make sense of.
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