love only in my dreams

• Artist: orangechanel
• Description: to my only love,
  (secret)
• Date: 12/08/2009
• Tags: love mine dreamsromance

when the sun comes up and the night goes away, all i can do is think of you.
at night in my dreams your never absent your always there as my hearts captain.
if you loved me my heart would fly,to only learn your my only guy.
my efection for you has changed from hate to love, who ever knew that you could be enough.
heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart

Comments

[Julia Dream]

Don't use emoticons in poems. This includes floating bubble-hearts. Also, learn the different between "your" and "you're". Here's a hint: you got it wrong. Use deductive reasoning on that.

[egoxromantic]

You spelled affection wrong. ._.