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I have a burning down in me
It is close to erupting
This feeling is driving me insane
I cant walk with out tripping on my own two feet
I see you with your friends
Then this feeling comes back, but with a vengeance
It hits me even harder when you walk up to me
Smile across your face
Blush around my cheeks
You reach for my hand
I reach for yours
You whisper in my ear
You are My only DESIRE
I smile and embrace your words
Then you embrace my feeling
I know you are Also my only DESIRE
As we sit and hug
This Feeling blooms into a new feeling
A more softer and sweeter Feeling
But As the bell rings for class
The first feeling comes back and sits and waits in my chest cavity
Don't Worry class will be over fast, You tell me
I sit and wait till i hear the bell then i turn to see
You waiting for me
Never Leaving
Me feeling the second feeling
This must be LOVE
- Title: Desire
- Artist: Eleniaa
- Description: OK i wrote this in my English class this year got an A+ but tell me what you think.
- Date: 11/28/2009
- Tags: desire
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Inferno Moonlight - 11/28/2009
- I think it needs to be seperated into stanzas and it seems like you drift off every 2 or 3 lines, but it's good, i'll give it a 4
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- irrelephantt - 11/28/2009
- Ahh my god this is so beatiful!! WAY BETTER THAN MINE! <3
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