Rag Doll

• Artist: hello taylorrr
• Description: a small analogy poem describing a relationship
• Date: 11/26/2009
• Tags: heartbreak love

Like a rag doll waiting on the floor,
I wait for you.
Like a rag doll longing to be loved,
I long for you to show love.
Like a rag doll misplaced among the toys,
I knew I was a mistake all along.
Like a rag doll having hope in her heart,
I had hope for you.
Like a rag doll who never left a child's side,
I never left yours.
Like a rag doll who was torn,
I began to feel my heart tear.
Like a rag doll boxed away,
I felt boxed away from you.
Like a rag doll wanting to play,
I wanted to be with you.
Like the rag doll who was abandoned on the floor,
You abandoned me.

Comments

[ii-iz-SaD-RoCkEr]

^U^ I <3 it tells alot about meh. Well Mostly O3O 5/5

[hello taylorrr]

it makes me really happy when someone can relate to my poems. :3 it's even more effective when you can feel the feeling it portrays.

[Crystal Blue Iris]

i just love it so much. It just blows me away on how amazing this is. Its just feels so real to me cause its like be in love when the other person doesn't love you. Its like a tug a war game and you lose
i just love and its just so powerful

[hello taylorrr]

aw thank you so much. that really means a lot to me. :3

[Crystal Blue Iris]

Wow that's deep.. I thought that was amazing.. I will never forget this! This is just..wow! its.. I'm just speechless. This is just wow.... This deserve a 7/5