Death cry

• Artist: GuySunshine
• Description: It's a death cry to a lost loved one.
• Date: 11/17/2009
• Tags: death

I never knew how much you meant to me
I never realized the feelings i have for you are so strong
I never knew what we would be
I never knew how love can last so long
I never thought you'd still be my best friend
I never knew I'd still love you
I never knew my love would bend
I never thought I'd Cherish you
But seeing you leave,
I feel an empty hole
I sit alone to grieve
I've lost my soul

Comments

[Trashed Angel]

The repetition you have really sets a beat going for the poem. Nice work. 5/5

[Sex_Addiction470]

i luv it even if it is sad, i can easily relate to wut ur saying and i love your writing, 5/5

[Lilith Kokos]

how beautiful...seriously...even though it's sad and gloomy... i love it... btw thanx 4 commenting....p.s u need to be my friend after you read this.... wuv ur work...