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Last night i snapped
So i sit in this white room
I wish I could leave
I blame this on you
I have to wait to see you
So I can kill you
I have to sit here,
feeling close to insanity
I do belong here.
- by Pandaonholiday |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/09/2009 |
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- Title: asylum (haiku)
- Artist: Pandaonholiday
- Description: This is a three stanza haiku about being in an asylum (no i dont know what its like xD) for those who aren't farmiliar with the poem type a haiku is a 5 syllable line then a 7 syllable then another 5 in each stanza(paragraph) please enjoy and rate as you see fit =3 thanks ~ oxkxw
- Date: 10/09/2009
- Tags: asylum haiku
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- h00drat64 - 10/13/2009
- First haiku I liked. Second haiku was dreadful. The "you" at every end of every line really threw me off. The third haiku was ehh. Overall 2/5.
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