Under that Tree

• Artist: csifool
• Description: Its a poem about my bf Vetran13.I love you sweety.
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: under tree

I saw a boy,all alone,sitting peacefully under a tree.
He sat there,with an occty as a hat,under that tree.
I spoke,"nice occty",and I too,sat under that tree.
He laughed,"thx"he said,we talked,under that tree.
After only moments,we left from under that tree.
Only to start a beautiful relationship.
Never again to sit under that tree.

Comments

[Veteran13]

Aww our meeting was definitely something beautiful love and I love you just like I love this poem. Lots of love <3

[csifool]

opps,guess i was typeing to fast and i didnt use spell chek

[meeleea]

Awww! This is so sweet! ><
I like the repetition. It makes for a nice flow.
(Relationship doesn't have a 'y' though.)