Friends

• Artist: nupa13
• Description: a short poem it was inspired by Christopher Marlowe's "Passionate Shepherd to His Love"
• Date: 08/30/2009
• Tags: friends

what if i said i waned to be more than just friends
something more like a couple that walks hand in hand
cause the truth is i love u and hate u
confusing right but that's just life
and no matter what others say what were doing is right
there just mad cause what there doing is left
plus there just mad because they've never been left breathless
which was the way you made me feel when our eyes first met
which is a feeling i can never forget because
you make me feel that way till this very day
and if that's not love then lets just follow this road
cause what I feels for you is a poker hand that will never fold
so what do you say would you like to engage
in a wild love that can never be cage
or remain friends that will never walk hand in hand

Comments

[Flush Of Fuchsia]

wow i like it maybe if your trying to be this serious the rhymes should happen less but i still like 4/5