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A woman walked into her house
To find it had been made a mess of
It didn’t seem to surprise her
She just made her way to a small room
It was a cluttered room
Filled with papers and books
In the midst of the clutter
Her husband sat at a desk
His pen was dancing eccentrically across the page
He said he had an inspiration
She said it was just the drugs
And that she was surprised he could even write
She walked out of the room
She put away her things
And she sat by a fireplace
And began to cry
Her husband was long gone
And the man that replaced him
Was an eccentric, drug addicted writer
Who stayed cooped up in his study
For days he would be in there, writing away
She’s come in from time to time
And every time she left that room
She’d wonder where her husband went.
- by Imperfect Replica |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/21/2009 |
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- Title: Untitled Piece 3 of 3
- Artist: Imperfect Replica
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Description:
This is one of the three things I've written recently during homeroom at school. They're not to great, but I thought I might as well post them. Someone's bound to like them...
- Date: 08/21/2009
- Tags: untitled piece husband drugs wife
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ProfessorKC - 08/26/2009
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Need to develop the characters abit more ... maybe some shocking metaphors/similes about the writere husband Like:
"his fingers dangled like corpses on ropes to click-clackety their toes upon his keyboard, but there was no life in them"
Just a suggestion. This needs more shock value and has some good potential. - Report As Spam
- SadVenus - 08/22/2009
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it's sad to be the woman on your story ;p
but it's nice, I can relate... - Report As Spam