Walls

• Artist: Agito Z Wilder
• Description: I remeber doing this not so long ago, i was simply bored, and fancied the out,look of a mentally unstable person...its rubbish..so i guess i failed lol
• Date: 08/06/2009
• Tags: walls

getting paranoia
looking round
no-one ther
not a sound

get home
go to bed
not a wink of sleep
cannot think
seeing red

see a person
all alone
single stab
solitary moan

casual walk
down the street
start to rain
covered in sleet

blue light flashes
start to groan
see no faces walls of foam

arms constricted
feet bound
walls of rubber
all around
seeing red
for last time
contorted face
only mine

Comments

[CassiCleopatra]

I agree . This is better than most poetry i've written in the past. 5/5

[King of Trash]

I agree with sakura... definitely not rubbish.. very good acctually... 5/5...

[Colour of Snow]

It's not rubbish, I think it's quite good.
4/5 :]