rose

• Artist: LostInThisDance
• Description: well ya this poem is about nature and how life is mean to be it i guess so ya ummmm its not has good as the other ones lol well ya vote and leave comments plz <3
• Date: 07/29/2009
• Tags: rose

i wonder how the rose felt
when children came up to it
and smelled it
when bees flew to it
and sucked up all its nectar
when its petals fell
and yet grew more
when the beautiful snow came
and yet survived without a scent
but when the time came
and finally died
i wonder how the rose felt then

Comments

[Megumi-Ayane-Kyoko]

This is an amazing piece of writing 5/5
can you rate mine please? "My Red Rose"

[SinclaireRose]

Wow that is good! Mirna chu better at doing poems. And I like the title X3

[xxroselovexx]

this is like good 4/5