Fallen Victim

• Artist: emeraldpuppy9
• Description: this a while back, was too lazy to post it :P
  i was feeling rly melancholy that day... like RLY bad >.<
  anyway.... ive had some ppl asking me to post some more poems, so here's one of the ones ive written in that huge non-posting gap
  sry for the wait you guys (:
  i appreciate your support <3
• Date: 07/24/2009
• Tags: fallen victim

I can’t believe I fell so deep
So hard and so far
That I’m beyond repair
I let my guard down
And let my barriers fall
Now, my heart throbs
And pulls at me

My mind questioning
And wary
I’m too tired for these inquiries
These thoughts
And emotional feelings

No idea that I could fall victim
Never thought that I would,
That I could
Freefalling into an endless abyss
Of dark, doomed despair

I trusted too much
Opened up
And played the game
Never thinking of what would come
Of the consequences that were inevitable

Into this trench
Trembling and tired
To a point of a numb throb
And caring to the point of indifference

Racing through the mind
Unable to forget,
To block out the unwanted memory,
To erase the pain
And stop the never ending drop

Comments

[broken_butterfly2]

wow it was great ur a gd poet lol nice job

[ParadoX_Revolution_XlV]

I liked it. ^-^ thanks for posting. 5/5

[Phinagin2000]

it's okay razz , still worth a 5/5! but it could use something more... thank you for finally posting some more poems! biggrin

[tehrandumhobo]

great poem. on your darker side, but nonetheless i love it. 5 stars. i could never write like this if my life depended on it. keep goin. ily

[emeraldpuppy9]

a few minutes? XDD
ty ^^
and kay, changed it (:

[zhongwen_shitsumeishi]

wow...really sad...how long did it take u to write this poem? xD....u have amazing writing skillz =D....o btw on the second stanza...change "to" to "too"....and yea...five stars as alwayz =]