I Feel Like Dying

• Artist: l Forbidden l
• Description: This is a poem about a teenage girl and has depression pain all the time. In the poem she's telling you how she lives trying to endure the pain. But does it work or not? Find out! =D Please comment/or rate! I appreciate it!
• Date: 07/23/2009
• Tags: feel like dying

I live in the darkness
Living with pain in my heart
Trying to endure the thoughts of suicide
My brain can't handle it
I can't handle it
I go to school
And try to endure the hatred comments
As I walk past my friends
They ignore me
I guess I shouldn't blame them
I am the dumbest teen in the school
Who would want to be a friend with me?
I walk into class getting no attention
The teachers aren't even listening to me.
I feel like dying
But I knot I'd miss my life
And I would regret dying
So that night I got happier
I wrote notes to all of my friends and more
I knew that might help
So the next day I passed them out and they accepted it
I felt surprised
No one ever noticed my walking by.
I felt like living
I had a purpose in life
Everyone liked me and I didn't have any pain of dying
I knew it would work!
It was a miracle!

Comments

[RipeRose]

I love it!
How come no on is commenting?!
5/5

[l Forbidden l]

I appreciate those who rate/or comment or say what you think~!