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His heart is caving in,
As the world crashes
Around his vision.
Tryng to cry out,
Something chokes him
He grabs for the hand.
His breathing gets shorter,
As the hand seems too real.
His eyes slowly open.
They grow wide at his fear
He gasps, scratching at the hand.
His last minutes turning into seconds.
The hand grips thighter
It's master's eyes gleaming
Dancing with pleasure.
In his last choking breath,
He speaks to his killer
. . .
"How.... Could.... I....."
- Title: Breath!
- Artist: Sunamarki
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Description:
It's a tad sad, but it's pretty good considering my other poems (if I ever put them up)
And in case your confused at the end, he had just suffocated himself. - Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: breath
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Comments (2 Comments)
- adek_wolf - 08/20/2009
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niiice.
i really like it.
kudos! - Report As Spam
- xxxxshavalxxxx - 07/18/2009
- OMG I BLOODY LUV IT ITZ DEEP! What made u write tht i wanna kno!
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