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he is laying, out of breath
his time has come, his time for death
he is sick of being beaten senseless every night
feeling his own pain, just isn't right
his ribs are broken, his chest is bruised
so tired of being used
his father's own personal punching bag
while everyone at school calls him a "f**"
he knows he must embrace his pain
but he lost it all in a blood red stain
tying a rope from a high tree
he knows soon he will be free
he has no friends that will care
he says it's okay cause he can bare
he finishes tying the rope around his throat
not feeling guilty about the letter he wrote
he jumped from tree
suspended in the air
he doesn't struggle, his eyes soon became a blank stare
he is found by his brothers
so they run and tell there mother
his mother started crying
inside she was dying
his father could care less
he thought to himself
"without him, life would be best"
at the open casket funeral, family members cry
as he is dismissed into the sky
- by Kazuto-Chan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2009 |
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- Title: lonely
- Artist: Kazuto-Chan
- Description: i wrote this one day in english.....i only wrote it in like 5 minutes...but everyone says its one of the best ive done....plus one of my most depressing....
- Date: 07/17/2009
- Tags: lonely
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Comments (4 Comments)
- saturnnightshade - 07/18/2009
- This is sad and scary because my bf...er..ex bf was being abused by his father and they jsut finished tearing out the wallpaper and the rug with his blood on it. His ribs are really broken, I know I keep accidentally popping them out of place. His chest isn't bruised though, thank God. I give you a 5/5 for this. It made me feel like crying about him again. God I miss him...
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- HotStuffOne14 - 07/18/2009
- Awww thas soo sad... I love it!
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- King of Trash - 07/18/2009
- Depressing... Dark... 5/5 sir...
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- Himiko Hearts - 07/18/2009
- Beautifully written...I've wrote many that are similar in my English Class XD or in my German Class lol. Kudos to you
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