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The girl knelt down in winter's blanket
White covered the cold air slicing
Her body freezing going numb
A strange man she has never seen shows
Smiling sympathetically he hugs her tight
He asks her if everything is all right
She says to him she is lost and confused
He tells her he knows about her then
He knows she has heart troubles
He knows she is dead
He tells her he too has died
But never to fear
He will be her guide
Because he was always
Her gaurdian that was near
It was her time
So he couldn't save her
But he told her how truly
He came to love her
He took her hand and kissed it tender
He touched her cheek
The man awaited her answer
The girl couldn't cry
She was shocked at this all
But if she was dead
She was free to do things
Before she couldn't do
She didn't know him by face
Nor by touch or thought
But she always knew he exhisted
Deep down in HER heart
And she took his hand
And thats when her life
Began to start
- by Zombie Kebab |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/09/2009 |
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- Title: The Girl and the Guy
- Artist: Zombie Kebab
- Description: Its a short story in poem form, please enjoy, and this is the first time I used poetry to express a story in this manner so please comment on what you liked and didn't like, thank you.
- Date: 07/09/2009
- Tags: girl
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LunaLoveWolf - 07/12/2009
- GREAT!!!!5-5 its nice keep up the good work i hope 2 hear more from you.
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- Tomas Youngblood - 07/10/2009
- good job 5/5
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- Dragons Willow - 07/09/2009
- its rough...needs some cleaning up. i do like the lack of punctuation and rhyme....cuz it's what i do too! who needs 'em right? LOL. anyway, i thought this to be a sort of tie in to the Teddy story....dunno if its a type of spinoff, but i luv the idea. your a great writer! keep it up, yesch?! 4laugh
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