The White Rabbit

• Artist: Kanmi-chan
• Description: The last couple of lines are kind of lacking, but I like the outcome.
  ... If you look closely enough, you can catch some dark humor in there.
  
  "He seems to have forgotten, his head's on the line."
  
  "He's late, he's late, he's late."
  
  See it now?
• Date: 07/05/2009
• Tags: white rabbit

Hickory, dickory, doc.
Look at the broken clock.
The hands don’t move,
Seems sad to me,
But then again—
Was it meant to be?
Look; the rabbit’s running late!
Or will he notice the broken clock;
And dumbly take the bait?
He must’ve forgotten—
His head’s on the line!
And now he’s very short on time!
He’s late, he’s late, he’s late.

Comments

[Xakariah_M_Shadow]

very funny you made it of the story "alice in wonderland" it reminds me of the TRUE stroy of it not the childrens tale version heehee very dalrkly humored and nice i like it......poor rabbit thats what you get XD

[beavisrose217]

Cute and darkly humored.