Stay

• Artist: Zolairty
• Description: Just something quick I made up. ^_^ C'mon, criticize! By the way, it's not like a whole song, it's something I'm working on. Thanks!
• Date: 07/03/2009
• Tags: stay lovesong

You tossed me aside
Practically threw me away
But I know that somewhere
Deep deep down in that cold black heart
I will stay

I know you feel hate
I know you feel sorrow
But the world isn't all bad, y'know
Just wait
Wait for tomorrow

You said no
You said go away
Just give up, boy
Cause I am most definantly
Here to stay

You know you love me
You practically need me
Stop and turn around
Come back to me safe and sound

You know you love me
You know it is true
You are just a stupid boy
But oh well
Hey, I'm stupid too.....
For falling in love
With you heart

Comments

[gabbel]

wow i like this. very nicely written.
flow needs a little bit of work. but man did you think of a great way to add such simply words and make it sound so deep

[The_Ruby_Monk]

I'm impressed. This is something "quick". It kinda skips a bit when you read it aloud but it still has a sense of amazing about it. I like it 5/5 from me.

[Zolairty]

THANKS! biggrin

[xXSkaylarXx]

its not all that but its koo ill give 4

[Harry Wins]

Awesome poem...voted 5/5

PS Can I get the free aquarium item now?