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What to do when you mess up
and can't fix it?
What can you do when you're such a major ******** up
and the pieces won't fit?
What about when the guilt makes you feel like you want to throw up
because you feel so sick with yourself and your bullshit?
How would you feel?
How would you deal?
Best friends keep leaving when you're at your weakest
and life seems it's bleakest
only to throw more at you.
The hate,the despair,
the stress that makes you pull out your hair...
Tears keep falling
and it feels like you're always crawling...
You've cried so much you should be numb.
Comfortably,blissfully numb.
But you're not.
tears will still fall because you know you've been dumb.
He was your best friend,your buddy,you hurt him.
Tears of guilt fill to the brim.
You never cry,but now you can't stop.
You just sit and cry.And cry.And cry...
There's nothing you can do now but watch the tears drop.
You want to hate him,with all your might...
but he was your best friend.
And although you try to hate him now,it's too late........
Because you've already lost the fight.
- Title: You've Lost the Fight
- Artist: WorIds
- Description: Just read it...I wrote it for my friend josh whose ignoring me becausse i was a b***h and was really stupid...it's my fault and I wrote this out of guilt in my journal then submitted it in the arenas...rate and comment if you like I don't care if you think it sucks...write watever you want as long as you write something down........................T_T
- Date: 06/27/2009
- Tags: youve lost fight
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Comments (7 Comments)
- WorIds - 08/11/2009
- Thank you
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- Tomas Youngblood - 08/11/2009
- realy good....5/5
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- WorIds - 07/11/2009
- Thank you all for the nice comments and tips
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- -Tessifer - 07/03/2009
- Nice, and very real. I love it. Be sure to write more dear. Hope you feel better.
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- Taste of a Raindrop - 07/02/2009
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Mmm, so much passion...
And guilt. It is good to feel guilt, but be sure not to let it rip you apart, okay? ^_^
I'm glad that you used proper grammar in your poem. I have found that a lot of people forget about that little *must* in all literature, razz
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- WorIds - 07/01/2009
- thank u for the comment,although it was more about messing up,losing battles uve waged withurself,etc,etc,i wrote it out of depression because my friend was fighting with me,but i guess it's all on how u look at the poem ^^ if u liked this one,i have more work,mostly depressing but still,if u want to look go right ahead
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- Lilith Celestine17 - 07/01/2009
- I love the title. I used have fights with my best friend too. But we would always get over them. And I'm sure you will too.
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